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Good plot

"I really liked this story. Im a baby "hog" and i just love that they have so many kids in the end. Spelling and grammar needs some work but the concept of the story is enjoyable."

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A story of cheaters

"This is nothing but a story of cheaters. Alex cheats on Alina. Years later Alex cheats on his wife with Alina. His wife is cheating on him. It's all very superficial. There is not a lot of character development and I wasn't really impressed with the plot."

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