What is your opinion?
JAYJAY
"I really like this story. It is just too short. Great characters. I want to read more and find out what happens ."
Fated mates
"It was a different story version. But interesting "
Fated Mates
"Liked the book but didn't like how it ended."
Better
"Better then I originally thought it was going to be "
Fated mates
"Good book. Very fast paced. Will be looking forward to see where the storyline goes in the next book"
Cliff hanger ending
"Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed you story. I hope you have the sequel out soon."
Fated mates
"Wow!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
Okay Where Is the Rest?
"Interesting story. It needs some filling in, in some places. Less sex, more character development and interaction. The sex is very visual, but that can get kind of old. A little more plot tension, as in don't resolve interactions so quickly. Let distrusting develop a bit more. You're almost there. You have a good story. It will be a great story with a little more meat on its bones. Wolves do prefer meaty bones, after all. ;)"
Fated mates
"Lovely plot but needs more editing"
Fated mates
"Lovely story."
Good
"Nice story"
Fated mates
"Such a good book really enjoyed reading this book what is the name of the second book "
Fated mate
"The writing can be better "
