What is your opinion?
Great read
"I loved the story the twist in turns as the main character finds out who she is and how her abilities grow. If you're into supernatural beast, adventure, mystery and sci-fi this is most definitely a must read. Can't wait to see what the future holds and if Jay will find his mother and what will he do."
Love IT
"its beautiful. you had me hooked from the first minute and I literally could not stop reading. Round of applause. For personal reasons it really speaks to me. Thank you. don't ever stop writing"
Another great opening.
"Again you had me second guessing myself right at the start, I'm like a paragraph in like 'Is this some lame sadgasm story about a girl in a car accident' nope it's some kind of zombie/monster apocalypse story with cars and swords- ok, I had literally no idea what was going on at the start but I liked it haha. It pulled me in right away. Don't get me wrong though it still needs some work, just some of the description and some of the metaphors didn't connect. Some of the lore around the world and creatures could have been delivered better. Like you could have had the kid disgusted by the guy killing the little girl monster rather than having him just thinking about people's reaction to it. Little things like that have a big effect, keeping showing instead of telling. Some of the dialogue needs a little work, it's a little too edgy for it's own good. It doesn't feel very natural. But overall it's fun, it has a cool concept, the action is good, like a modern Witcher, very entertaining."
congratulations
"Its history is quite interesting. Is it part of some series that you are writing? The first three paragraphs leave a little doubt when reading because it seems to be the continuity of a chapter.The writing runs well and I'm reading the other chapters. The rest is very good."
review
"This story is simply brilliant, you had me hooked from the start and just loved reading it. Fans of adventure, mystery and supernatural beasts will definitely enjoy. Keep writing"
