What is your opinion?
LOVING THIS
"The plot is amazing!! I love how characters are developing and you can tell that they both have their own personality. I’m loving this and looking forward to more of it. We are now further in and the plot is unravelling nicely. I love this."
Review
"I am absolutely hooked up. I am enjoying your work a lot. Your work is amazing. The dialogues seem very real. You have done a great job in shaping your characters. Keep up the good work. Your book has loads of potential. "
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"Right from the beginning, I felt drawn to Dillon and Yessie, and it’s clear the author has put a lot of care into shaping these characters. Dillon’s personality is already taking shape in a really genuine way, especially through his inner thoughts, which makes him feel relatable and complex. The dynamic between Dillon and Yessie is heartwarming, and the bond between them feels natural and realistic. The character development is not bad for such an early stage, and it’s clear the author has a great handle on creating characters you want to root for. I totally would recommend it! Please finish the story, I want to see more character development 🙏🏻"
A cute and emotional beginning
"Note that this review only covers the initial chapters of the book 1-3, so it is certainly not comprehensive of what the story may become. I think this is a great start to a heartwarming story. The author is particularly good at getting inside the characters' heads and letting us see their personalities through their thoughts. There is already a warm feeling, and this is enhanced greatly in chapter 3. I am left wondering what is in store for these two and I definitely want to know more. Plot gets a three only because there is very little plot development so far. I don't even have a hint of where the story is going, really. Grammar gets a 3 primarily because of the higher number of typos/mistakes I found, mostly in chapter 3. I definitely want to stay in the life of Dillion and Yessie and see what happens with them!"
