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"This is a highly recommended novel for people in love with harry potter and fiction .this book just takes you to a completely other world.they level of creativity is just amazing.when you are describing stuff it just takes the person right to the situation.hopefully this book will go to great heights."

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"I just finished the first chapter of my story, and I’m pretty stoked about it! The setup is intriguing, and I feel like I’m giving readers a taste of the world I’ve created. The characters are starting to come to life, and I love where their journeys are heading. That said, I know I need to work on making the plot a bit clearer—sometimes I get caught up in the details! The pacing felt a little off, especially at the end; it kind of rushes from the exciting parts to wrapping things up. Overall, though, I think it’s a solid start for anyone into fantasy, especially if you’re a Harry Potter fan. Can’t wait for more feedback!"

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Darkness Among Starwhisper

"Hi again! I have to say, the sequel to the series was a huge upgrade! Reading it, I've enjoyed a lot of moments! 💯 Before I talk about the story, let me just say, the book cover and the description are great! The description lured me into reading this! 🔥 Mira and Astra being the main villains of the story was such a great idea! The big bad turn out bring the biggest and baddest ones in the story! As infuriating bully characters can be, you've done such a great job writing them! Their personality, attitude was simply great! 🤩 Speaking of character personality, you've done a better job in this book writing Harper's friends! Specially Asher! I Harper and Asher have great chemistry and I loved them together when cleaning the library! 💫 Looking forward for more, great work! 💛"

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