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LE TEMOIN DE TROP

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Summary

L'action débute en mars 2023, en Gironde, alors que le dirigeant d’une société de transport vient d’être assassiné. Le lieutenant Tom Roche est sollicité pour résoudre l’enquête. Très vite, il tombe amoureux de la principale suspecte. Rapidement, il connait l’identité du coupable mais manque de preuves pour l’arrêter. Quant au tueur, il est sujet à des troubles psychologiques et tombe peu à peu dans la folie.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
19
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

Lundi 7 mars 2016, 19 h 15

Sa peur.

L’augmentation de son rythme cardiaque.

Son corps tremblant.

Une vision d’horreur.

L’homme baigne dans une mare de sang, le regard vitreux.

A ses côtés, une femme inconsciente.

Sa fuite dans la pénombre.


Ces images obsèdent son esprit. Après son acte enragé, il saute dans son véhicule et fonce chez elle. Dès qu’elle ouvre la porte, il tombe à terre, en état de choc, et enlace ses hanches. Elle sent contre son dos l’objet qu’il serre dans son poing. Le visage contre son ventre, il commence son récit.

Elle l’entraîne de toutes ses forces dans le couloir de sa maison puis referme derrière elle. Elle devine qu’une chose tragique vient de se produire.

Il hoquète, sanglote entre chaque phrase. En toute confiance, il se laisse aller. Il lui donne le trophée recouvert de liquide écarlate.

Lorsqu’elle réalise l’horreur de la situation, elle sait qu’elle va le soutenir avec évidence. Anéantie, elle le rassure, le cajole, trouve les mots doux qui le calment. Elle promet de le protéger.


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