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Desire's dilemma

"I luv the story. Waiting for next part"

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Fate

"Great book!!"

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Simple misunderstanding

"While I like the story in the beginning with the way the characters portrayed, I lost interest towards the ending. What seems to be a simple misunderstanding of two adults became a big nonsense drama that could have been solved by a simple talk. Anyhow, this is ALL purposely to prolong the story that somehow leads to disinterest. If the sequel will be published here, I’d rather skip the story and proceed to epilogue to avoid all the nonsense. Hopefully Elizabeth and Daniel have a happy ending. If not, I’ll understand. "

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