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Compelling Read

"I was immediately hooked. As in it’s 3 am I really should sleep hooked. The characters are wonderful and I can’t wait to see what happens next."

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Great descriptive writing

"Thank you for sharing your writing with us readers. Your characters are compelling. I look forward to reading more of this tale."

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Throughly enjoying this book

"Can’t wait for more of the authors work"

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The moon mark

"This is the best book ever read, good plot and great writing not just for the story but also for the characters and the great grammatical structure , I love lumen and Josh , thank you so much for writing this book:):):)"

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Good

"Story is good"

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The moon mark

"Fantastic story can't wait to see where the next part of this series takes us. Thank you "

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The moon mark

"It’s really good.. I enjoyed reading it."

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Can’t remember title

"The plot is strong The characters are built and take on a life of their own I can’t wait to find out what happens next"

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The moon mark

"Pretty good although there were points I felt I needed more info or explanation. I wanted Seth to grow on me more but found he was hollow. I also feel Athius was wasted in this story. Im a bit sad."

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The Moon Mark

"Intriguing story. Looking forward to next updates."

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His slave

"Interesting can't put it down"

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