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Amazing story

"The story is amazing I honestly loved it. The characters and the dialogue are awesome. I will definitely recommendn it to my friends "

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Love love love

"Love love love the plot! I cannot stop reading! Lots of emotions."

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I miss him

"I miss my husband a lot.... He works abroad ... And I really miss him... After reading this .... "

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Marcello

"I love the story and the characters are so cute 😊 "

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MARCELLO

"THIS IS LITERALLY THE BEST STORY EVER!! I HAVE READ IT LIKE 4x & I WILL CONTINUE TO READ IT OVER AGAIN BECAUSE ITS THAT GOOD!! MARCELLO & ELLA ARE THE BEST COUPLE & THE SEXUAL SCENES ARE THE BEST PART OF THE BOOK YOU WONT BE ABLE YO PUT IT DOWN!!!!"

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We need more chapters. Marcello, a very interesting read.

"It is a lovely read, very interesting, and gets more exciting. "

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Marcelo

" The main character wasn’t to smart! One she had sex with a guest in the hotel she works for! Then she go back to the suite and start nosing around! Then get caught and then ends up fighting with the guest of that room! And then fighting with her outside of the hotel and threatening to kill her! And telling the guy she had sex with ! That he was bad in bed!!"

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Good job

"The entire plot is exciting, keeping the readers on the edge and curious as to what would happen next. Really well written "

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Lanka

"The story i read so far is quite interesting "

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Wish I knew it wasn't free.

"Either post the entire story free or get paid for the entire story. It's upsetting to get interested in a story then find you can't afford to finish it. I can't leave a decent review 4 chapters in other than to say I was curious enough to flip to the next unavailable chapter."

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