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Vampire Lover

"Lovely book "

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Vampirw

"Not applicable"

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Vampire Lover

"I hope you are making a sequel to this book!!!!"

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Amazing awesome love it

"Thus this is a very sweet awesome book i truly l love it I know some people who like to read vampire books like me because i think there cool!! Loves everything hands down no questions asked. It was fantastic"

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Good

"Good so far "

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Awsome

"It's an amazing novel "

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Vampire lover

"Dear, You are the best,I will be very thankful to you for this for your writing skills,really looking forward to get another publishing from you. And as who are reading this review please do read this story you will definitely fall for this and never forget this story............ "

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Ended too soon

"Wish there was more to the story. Seems like it ended in the middle of the story. A bit difficult to read at times, grammer. Overall a good plot, good story. I would recommend."

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Nice

"Am still reading the nook"

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Interesting

"So far, the story flows nicely, though a little fast paced"

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Vampire Lover

"A bit disappointed with the ending.....literally the author hanging the end.....please make the sequel......"

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Vampire Lover

"This was a surprising one, I must say. I wasn't expecting the ending to end the way it did, however it did portray the beauty of tragic love stories that most people these days steer clear from. It's not your typical vampire love story, but it does capture that kind of "realistic feel" better than a happier outcome would've given. Its a pretty good story and a nice plot. The characters were very fitting to the roles and followed through through contributing to the ending that made the story more interesting than I initially thought it was. I'm hoping it really is the final chapter. The parting made the story reach a peak definitely gave the plot an aesthetic feel to it. "

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Vampire brothers

"It's ok the grammar is horrendous"

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Needs more detail

"Very short story with grammatical errors. A good proofreading and additional details would help it read better"

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Vampire

"This storyline is good but it would have been better to expand it to explain it alot better. One point ken and annie just met, then you skipped ahead to half a year later and they were completely in love. It makes the story feel like its missing a huge chunk. The grammer and spelling should have been double checked. There were sentences that made me feel confused for as they were put together. This is not a bad story. It just needs to be explained better."

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Vampire Connoisseur

"I LOVE vampire novels. I was super excited to come upon yours. I really love how easy it was to read. But then I started finding a lot of grammatical errors and sentences that distracted my reading. I think this is a great start to the book, but I think I need to come back when it's a bit more polished. Keep going! This is a great start!"

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Vampire Love

"The book was very good. Although I would have preferred if the story were a little long to actually develop some of the chapters that were not completely expanded. But all in all the story was very good and enjoyable to read."

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Vampire lover

"This is complete BULL....this is BULLSHIT!!!!! Is DAT all DAT there is to vampire lover???? The end was ass fuckin shit! WHY!!!!"

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