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What is your opinion?
JAYJAY
"Can't get enough of these characters. "
Destined mates 2
"Lovely story."
Destined mates
"Please continue this book"
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"Truly -- more showing, less telling. I really like your stories. They just need some more filling out. Take the time to develop your characters a little more. For example, the king He's a little cardboardish. I don't have a sense of who he is"
