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Divine intervention

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Summary

A boy who saw a divine intervention but could not understand it.

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Other
Author
Aditya
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Divine interv

Once upon a time there was a  boy whose name was Sourabh. he went to a party with his friends. In this party there were lot of girls. Sourabh could watch all the girls but he was not able to watch a girl called Sandhya. Whenever he watched her he felt fear. He felt he will die. Clueless he went home he told this incident to her maa. Her maa was a very intelligent person. She used her powers to see in time.  Then she told Sourabh that in one of Sourabh's birth Sandhya was his brother. Irresponsibly may be he was watching Sandhya out of love way he watched other females. So that is why he was having this  fearfull experiences. It was divine power stopping one from making any mistake unknowingly. If someone does not follow this divine law he dies.  She told him " Its good that  somethings are impossible".

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