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Summary

Marcus Luna enters Year 11 Class 1 at Hachin Academy, a prestigious school where only the exceptional thrive. His sudden and unconventional arrival immediately draws attention, but it’s his shocking defeat of the class’s top academic leader, Hazel Terrell, that truly sets the stage for a fierce rivalry. At Hachin, competition is everything. With a ruthless ranking system now in place, students and entire classes are pitted against one another for rewards, status, and survival. One misstep could mean expulsion. As mind games unfold and tensions rise, alliances are formed, betrayals are inevitable, and trust becomes a dangerous gamble. In this battlefield of a school, Marcus must decide whether to rely on others or himself—and ask the question: How far do you go to win… when losing means disappearing? ARC 3.5 'INTERLUDE ARC' – RELEASING DECEMBER 4TH. patreon.com/Dave_Atta

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2mo ago
Chapters
86
Rating
1.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

PROLOGUE

As expected, my name took its rightful place at the top of the list. Yet, it was not the recognition that stirred the most intriguing reaction, but rather the response from a young girl positioned amidst the crowd. Her lips quivered in shock as she read the names written on the board, a palpable shock emanating from her being.

“How?”

Her voice trembled, just managing to escape her throat. It was a question laced with doubt, a plea for understanding amidst the tumult of emotions swirling within her. Her world appeared to spin on its axis in that fleeting moment, and she grappled with the stark reality before her.

Meanwhile, a sense of triumph surged within me as I observed her turmoil. The result of careful preparation and unwavering will had paid off, and the sight of her shattered composure only fuelled my satisfaction. She turned to face me with poise and rage, a powerful mixture of resentment and anger burning in her gaze.

I met her gaze with a serene smile, a mask concealing the turbulent currents of triumph coursing through my veins. Our quiet exchange at that instant spoke so much; her disbelief and my unspoken declaration of victory intertwined in a silent symphony of rivalry.

Sure enough, I’d won, exactly like I’d promised. However, beneath the façade of victory hid the indisputable reality—a truth veiled by the shadow of uncertainty and the echoes of an unmet challenge.

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imtiyaz__sheikh
imtiyaz__sheikh

82 chapters in and still going, that's impressive. the "his shocking..." cliffhanger in the blurb is doing its job lol

4 months
Eunice
Eunice

The opening immediately creates rivalry and makes me curious about what happened between the narrator and the girl. I like that we’re shown the narrator’s satisfaction rather than just being told she won, because it gives her a slightly dangerous edge.

The last line also works as a hook because it suggests that winning isn’t the end of the conflict. watch the repeated use of words like “shock,” “turmoil,” and “triumph,” since some of the emotions could be shown more naturally through the characters’ actions and reactions. This chapter makes me want to know what exactly they were competing for and what challenge is still coming.

a month

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