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Act365

"Love it, great story. Hope they find some peace, maybe a baby."

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Interest approach

"This is a quick read. The style and word usage I’d easy to read. Since I read quite rapidly, I often have to wait for the next chapters .it holds my interest."

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NannaC

"Enjoying the read. Noticed characters are mixed up a couple of places but other than that well written "

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Ooo, Drama

"Its getting good cant wait"

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Love this

"I love the dynamic between the three of them once they get past some of the hurt and guilt "

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LOVE WINS EVERYTHING IN WORLD

"I LOVE THIS STORY I HOPE THEY CAN ALL STAY HAPPY AND TOGRTHER AND THEY NEED TO KNOW ABOUT KIARA PARENTS MURDER AND RESPECT HER WITH WHOLE HEART IT WAS GREAT AMAZING I LOVED IT WOW 💥😘❤️‍🔥🌠"

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The twin alpha mate

"I love love it. The cute and the fact she not happy with them . Hope it works out for them. Shame need a happy ending and so do they. I don't think the bad. It the curse"

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The handicap house

"The more I have a good time to do it tomorrow is the best day for me to get it done with the best of the day I can be there by the thumping of your house in a bit of time to see the doctor today at work today if you want to go with the speed test to get the other day off right we will have a great day for me to get it done "

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Great

"Excellent can’t wait to read next chapters "

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Some punctuation issues but good.

"The story can be a bit confusing as the emotions from the betrayal the FL experiences just get flushed away but to the bond. Some paragraphs have too many sentences on them where a coma could ahve been used."

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