Halloween 1

"Very well done, strong character descriptions and a lesson taught. Differences aside, we are the same. I only have one issue, not with the story, but with the cover. There are two different spellings of Halloween, and both are incorrect. Is this intentional? If so, it is quite jarring to me. You may want to make corrections. All in all, a good story. Thank you for sharing. Love to all writers and readers. Story completed. It was an easy fun read, with many lessons incorporated into them. Also, love the new cover. Keep up the writing, I had fun. Thank you for sharing."