Looks promising!

"I quite like the author's style, and this looks like a good start. Interesting setting, plot, and first chapter, and though we don't know the characters' names yet, I'm looking forward to their first introduction and their backstory. This is just my kind of story, with humor, interesting cast, and some mystery. No grammar issues at all, everything flowed well, and I liked the transitions from one scene to the next. It's too early to actually review, so I will leave this here for now and update it once more chapters are out. Best of luck Mochibun!"