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Fan Flipping-tastic!

"Sweet, genuine, and quietly addictive. The connection builds so naturally, with a soft, heartfelt progression that’s easy to fall into. A comforting, feel-good romance that stays with you."

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A unique and touching style

"There’s something about this story that truly stands out to me: the way it’s narrated. It feels like reading the characters’ thoughts exactly as they happen—raw, unfiltered, and honest. The style reminds me a little of Saramago, which gives it a unique, intimate charm. On top of that, it’s a story overflowing with tenderness, and as a BL fan, I absolutely love it. It’s simply beautiful. Keep up the amazing work!"

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Very Cute!

"I actually think this story is cute! I mean it was not what I expected. I did find the first few chapter a bit harder to read because it was all one giant paragraph but it has heart! The growth in this story is adorable and I really enjoyed it. Keep writing! Never give up <3"

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Blushing!

"I loved reading the first few chapters! I really enjoyed the writing style, as it feels informal, and as if the reader is really in the characters' heads throughout. I caught myself smiling, chuckling and even blushing throughout. Super excited for the next chapter!"

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Very cute

"Only two chapters in, but this story is very cute. There is a promise of "first times" as a theme - with Noah, being openly aroace and having a first romantic crush, and too with Evan who is also exploring outside of his usual comfort zone, flirting with a stranger. It's also clear that the author has thought a lot about the characters. They have detailed lives, hobbies, and backgrounds. It's a little too early in the story to provide constructive criticism, so I'll refrain. But with that said I am interested in seeing where the story goes and how the plot develops from here. Will be watching for updates. "

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This story 🙂

"I like the writing style and I like the way the author puttted her words together on this! The story is unique in its own way and I like how it’s subtle and nothing seems to forced, especially with the romance and etc. The characters have unique personalities and seem pretty realistic. Keep up the good work!"

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The Storyteller's Review

"Pro: Cute first meeting story Con: Making me realize that I need to find recourses about aro-ace Recommended to: Reader who wanted soft MLM without spicy content 🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀"

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