Inkitt
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Bev

"Well written loved the story "

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s'étais vraiment fantastique

"pas de mot pour décrire mes émotions "

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The mafia and the wrong sister

"short and simple. Dramatic to the right amount needed and suspense too. definite recommend"

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Cute story

"I really liked the plots and turns in the story ! Great read for ppl who don’t wanna read anything too spicy "

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Interested

"The book was interesting to read "

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The mafia and the wrong sister

"Great read with great characters. Although the story had some twists and turns, the end of the story seemed to fall/finish too quickly. It was still an enjoyable read."

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Review

"Love every bit of it"

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Wow

"I was not expecting this from the story but I thoroughly enjoyed reading it "

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Brilliant plot and incredible writing style

"The authority depicts the characters so well. The story is light, dark, and captivating. I am thoroughly enjoying it. "

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Great story

"Loved the story and the plot. True love wins the day"

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Good

"Good to read. Lots of suspension. I feel with the main character. The family is so horrible, one wants to hurt them. Keep up writing stories like this."

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Beautiful

"Loved the story, wish you had a 2nd book"

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It ja great content

"This is wonderful book and the writer perfectly knows how toh hold the audience "

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The mafia and the wrong sister

"I love this story Once I started I can’t stop till I finished it in one go "

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The Mafia and the Wrong Sister

"Great Story!👍👍"

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Janegreat story 🩷

"Gloved the story❤️"

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The Mafia and the wrong sister

"I love the story, and I can't wait to finish reading, I'm sure it will have a spectacular ending. I also like the option to comment on chapters etc."

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More addicting than drugs !

"Can’t stop reading not even to eat its way to addiction "

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Loved it

"Really liked characters and their development across the chapters... I honestly believe the length was just what the story needed HOWEVER I would really have loved it if it was much longer!!! Maybe a sequel?? I'll be waiting!!!"

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