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Love jawbreaker

"I love his stamina hahaha there’s really a lot to explore and he has just got out of his village and a lot has happened already when can I see a real life jawbreaker hahaha "

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hello from vietnam

"Hi, im newbie on this site, just knew you from lpsg forum. i really loved your style writing <3 makes me... :D but my english skills so bad, then i always take time to translate some words, that mean sometimes im lost in words :( i know your works so good, but in my hope, i want to copy/patste and translate the story by google translate hahaha then i can enjoy much more! Yeah, thats just only my opinion. and please keep the Jawbreaker's journey on going, i need to "see" him more :) Best regards"

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