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Don't know

"Heather,elsie,daniel,eric,oliv"

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two words.

"Three words. I love it."

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Oops

"I found this one last😅 Oh well, here we go. "

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Keep it up

"I really like the plot of the story because most people don't usually write this kind of thing and you make it as realistic as such a story could be. It is a bit obvious that it's based on Kid Danger to me. Your writing style is on point, hardly any mistakes with grammar or punctuation. I would definitely recommend it to others. Keep it up."

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