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A good story doesn't always have a happy ending

"Sexy story and full of intriguing details. Not all stories have a happy ending and that's ok, def a real life quality to it. The pic of Jake was exactly how I envisioned. I saw Tori as more blonde, Emi looked like Tori, Liam was as described and East was more like Henry Cavill. "

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Tori's Obsession

"I enjoyed this book although the chapters and story were very quick and I think I would have liked more added to the story. More of the action with East. It was a fun read."

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No happy ending

"Really wanted Tori to make a grand gesture towards Jacob and end up with him. Also would have been nice to know whose point of view the paragraphs were from. I agree with MirreStoryteller. It needs another chapter. "

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