Inkitt
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Super story, missing a last chaptor who infoem the state of the 6 in say 1 year

"I just tead the book. I am not a writer, so go on whriting, than i keep reading"

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Octavia’s escape

"Ok where’s the rest of the story. Really enjoying the story and the characters "

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Fantastic so far!

"Good characters, good pacing, nice mix of romance, sex, emotions and action "

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Very good read

"Definitely hooked there's a few typos here and there but over all I'm enjoying it quote a bit"

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Can't put it down!

"Compelling story with just the right amount of steaminess to keep it in my hands!"

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Unbelievable

"Crazy crazy Awesome story... Really can't wait for more, seriously id read it nonstop rite now if there were more chapters... hopefully we won't have to wait long"

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Octavia's escape

"It's getting hot in here 🔥"

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Octavia's Escape

"Loving this so far. Looking forward to more chapters!🥴🥰🤪"

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Good book

"Am enjoying so far"

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octavia’s escape

"that’s really a hot scene🫣🫣"

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Octavia’s Escape

"Great Intro, when do we get the rest?"

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Avid reader

"Love the storyline. Too sad about the girl. Great writing and can’t wait to read more. Definitely worth reading."

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From Aravinda

"Please complete the story, and start a continuation...the ending of the 36th chapter here is killing me!!!! Please finish the story soon"

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Octavia escape

"I chose the rating leaving room for improvement. Don't like the fact that nothing is said about the men searching for Octavia or some detail of who exactly the people are who took her. I would recommend the book to my friends. "

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