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Chills and Thrills Grave Mistake
"I think this is a great story. There's good suspense and scene descriptions so it's easy to follow along. There could be more chapters but I think it's good with the ones it has now. Happy writing!"
Cool Little Story
"I liked it, short and sweet. The ending was a little abrupt and some parts felt a little rushed, but it was a decent read. I would have also liked to have had a bit more insight into the antagonists' motives and perhaps a little bit more tension in their final scene, as it resolves pretty quickly. Overall, though, nice work!"
