What is your opinion?
Thx for the early chapters Babe
"I already read to Ch 40 since I'm one of the editors of this story and I must say: You are genuinely twisted for Ch 40's ending, but I love you for it. I was really surprised by where Alan's character went by that chapter since up til that point, he was pretty minor in the story and only added to the erotic sections, but goddamn does he force his way back in the narrator like the icon he is. Rhett is just the horniest man alive, and I'm here for it, so w main character, but I was surprised by his complexity throughout, but especially by Ch 40, where he literally could've just been a basic horny protagonist with no goals or aspirations and everyone would've been fine with it since he sleeps around a lot in the story, but for him to truly elevate himself like he does by the point that I've read...Chef's kiss. Harley's story in the middle was long, tragic, and full of insight into why he is the way he is, and I'm definitely on the side of people who think he's a good person "with extra steps" lmaoooo. Franky was kind of meh at first but thankfully when he gets his own chapters, I was rooting for him all the way. He was also helped by Harley and their love for each other is so special I wanna die. Griffin...NO SPOILERS, but omg, I was surprised by how much we got of him towards the chapter I edited up to, because man, that dude is something else. I thought because he wasn't in it at the beginning that much that he'd fall into the trap of just being the soulmate of Griffin, but as the story went on past Sex Energy, I was shook by how much he got involved, especially considering that he was able to somehow make the other supernatural beings in the novel seem so trivial by Ch 40, where he really shines. Overall, good job, and keep sending me chs to edit and not Joel or Christina, I want more of this one. They can have Asparia Academy not this (please don't send another Asparia Academy ch at me I'll scream and cry myself to sleep, that story's chs are way too long, which is fun to read, but please no more torture). Anyway, luv u, and keep doing what ur doing."
Waiting more
"Very interesting story and I can't wait what happens next."
