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Melantha

"Like the plot and writing style. Pace is good. "

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Amazing

"I absolutely love the writing. The way you describe the way Melantha feels, the way she sees things, I feel like I'm there with her feeling it into my soul. The story, the plot, the kingdoms are amazing. You are a really good writer and I hope you have motivation to continue this because I'm in love with the characters."

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