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"It was painfully beautiful and oh so so sad..."

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A Perfect Storm

"Beautiful and heartbreaking. This is written in such a way that one finds oneself thinking "I should have seen that coming," but when it comes, it's still a tragedy. The characters are well-realized and vivid, the dialogue is entirely natural, and the story is painfully good."

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