Inkitt
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San Diego

"Short,hot and spicy 🌶 🔥 "

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Threesome with Mike, Alley and Ben

"This is so tense and deliciously written. Keep it coming"

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Good

"It is good. Just want to keep reading "

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Cheaters gonna cheat.

"Potentially good hotwife story critically damaged by the lack of moral character on the part of the wife. No redeeming qualities to the character whatsoever. The second half of the story, where everything is on the table, is significantly better. This is only a critique of the realism of the responses of the characters to the circumstances they are in, and I'm only offering it because my sense is that the author is capable of MUCH more. There were hints of the characters moving on the right directions, but those impulses were unconvincingly swept aside without much real thought, afterthought or regret - sacrificed to the sleazy idol of "erotica" and failing to treat serious things seriously. It's irresponsible and off putting that way. "

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Great book

"Loved everything about this storyline."

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