What is your opinion?
Awesome
"This story is awesome. i am saying it in a single word. It is AWESOME. The story has a fast pace, the hints, the suspense, the use of imagery, OH LORD that's fantastic. You can really feel Daliha's frustration when the vampire confronts her, playing with her emotions and piercing through her self making her harassed. Also loved the Hoodie part. Keep up the good work author but I just have one suggestion, consider using casual language in the dialogue, it sounds overly formal. But in anyway, this story has a feel that would make readers die for more. I will be waiting for updates, author. Hats of to you!"
Engaging and alluring plot i must say. So far the story is so interesting.
"Its about a girl unaware of what she is and what effect she has on a dangerous vampire. Well i want to see how Damien is going to stop himself from falling in love with her. Really looking forward to see how it unveils further."
PALE HEARTS
"The story is all about bullying and can be triggering if you are not into this kind of troupe. Damien Xavier and his group are all bastards. They are horrible and pathetic. I love this book as author mentions the tag of enemies to lovers. It seemed to a be a perfect story of enemies to lovers. Coz bad boys bowing to innocent girl is my kinnda troupe. The male lead is extremely rude and a complete asshole. A morally black one. But I hope the author will show him showing some mercy to our cute little innocent doll. The plot is so unique. I am loving it. Damien is so hot LOL. The dialogues are so spicy. I recommend this book to all the dark romance girlies who falls for villian and always love morally grey character. Good work author. Keep it up..👍"
The plot is soo compelling and the dialogues too spicy to handle 🤭 . It becomes more suspicious with each proceeding chapter ☺️ Just Love it I also wish to see this on 😍
"The plot is soo compelling and the dialogues are too spicy to handle 🤭 . It becomes more suspicious with each proceeding chapter ☺️ Just Love it I also wish to see this on screen 😍 love the character of Delilah and Damian . Yep and the trio of Mia , Anna and Delilah 😘 I bet they are going to be the best friend trio . Lots of wishes and Good Luck to author keep it up "
Review
"You have done an amazing job so far. I really like your work, it’s quite unique. I am absolutely hooked up. The plot is interesting and the characters are well-finished. Keep up the good work.❤️✨"
Pale Hearts
"Great length for the chapters and amazing depth and use of descriptive words! I read through the story quickly an loved it. Only minor grammar change other than that it's great so far! Keep it up! "
Pale Hearts: The Anemic Attraction
"Good story. Damien and his bunch are total assholes. Wording kind of hard to follow.....seemed like words missing, switched and alot of repeating. "
Review of Pale Hearts – Anemic Attraction
"The premise of Pale Hearts – Anemic Attraction is intriguing, and the author’s writing is technically strong, with good grammar and a clear sense of direction. However, I found myself struggling to connect with the story due to a few key issues. The main lead, Damien, is a character I hoped would have more depth. While a flawed or even mean protagonist can be compelling, there needs to be an arc—some growth or traces of empathy to make his journey engaging. Unfortunately, through the first eleven chapters, he remains unyieldingly harsh, making it difficult to root for him or see any emotional complexity. Additionally, his dialogue could use some refinement. As a king, his words should carry more weight, yet they often feel repetitive. A more deliberate and impactful approach to his dialogue would better reflect his authority and presence. The dialogue in general feels rushed, which impacts the pacing and character development. Conversations often lack the natural flow needed to fully flesh out emotions and motivations, making some interactions feel abrupt or underdeveloped. On a positive note, I find the female lead charming—her shy and beautiful nature makes her endearing, and I’m hoping to see significant growth in her character as the story progresses. That being said, I appreciate the effort and creativity the author has put into the story. With more attention to character growth, dialogue refinement, and pacing, this book could become a much more immersive and emotionally engaging read."
