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Well written

"I was really surprised by this story very well written, no drifting from the story. Very good reading. "

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lzt

"would love to know how Hunter and Ana’s story ends"

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Ana and Hunter

"Informational but sad"

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Why do u want them to break up so bad?

"If you wanted her to leave him why did you make him nice and loving instead of evil or a bad person? Makes no sense to have them break up. Makes more sense for her to have to struggle through what happened to be with him again and him dealing with the rouge king. The character personalities do not mesh with a break up. "

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