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Awakening the alphas mate.

"Awesome story I can not wait to see where it goes. I hope you do plan on a second part of the story."

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Awakening the alphas mate.

"Awesome story I can not wait to see where it goes. I hope you do plan on a second part of the story."

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Interesting plot

"This is an interesting idea for a book. I like the way the author pulled it together so that the reader can understand what is the meaning behind the issues going on. There are some grammatical problems though not so bad as to take away from what the author is saying or meaning to get the story out there for the readers. Really liked this story and I know if you give it a chance to read it I think you will like this book. "

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Awakening the Alpha's mate

"Great story! Excellent plot!! Only issue I had was Jalia's wavering, her self doubt and the fact that she showed Vela mercy. "

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Awakening of the Alpha’s Luna

"Really great story "

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awakening of the Alpha's mate

"Hey, how have you been recently? I'm Kennis. I just read your work ,and I think you write really well. Have you considered publishing it on other platforms to reach a larger audience?"

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Sherri

"Loved this story am looking forward to your next book "

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Awakening of the alpha's mate

"Omg...this book was amazing and the way you left it...please tell me there will be a book 2 to this story. Awesome job writing this!!!"

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Awakening of the Alphas Material

"Wow! Yes! Loved it! Where and when is book 2???"

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Intense story

"Thank you for sharing your story with us readers. I hope you write a follow up since you have left this story on a cliffhanger. I look forward to reading more of your work."

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Jaila

"She was raised by witch and now finds out she's a wolf shifter from a special bloodline. But she must find her place in the pack and protect them."

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Pretty good so far .

"The story has great story lines and the characters are strong. It does repeat thoughts and feeling’s within each chapter, and is a bit slow with the flow of the dialogue."

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AMAZING WORK "Awakening of the Alpha's Mate"

"Hello! The world and characters you created in "Awakening of the Alpha's Mate" truly inspired me when I recently read it. As a comic book artist who enjoys turning narratives into images, I would be thrilled to discuss the possibility of working with you Feel free to reach out at! Discord: wiewior114 if you're interested. I'm eager to hear from you!"

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So Far So Good.

"The storyline is good. I just wish it was more info on Jalia’s backstory with the witches and Jameel is little more forceful regarding his mate."

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"Feel like the same thing is being written from one chapter to the other. Go past the drama between Jalia and Vela and finish it up"

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It was good

"I recommend this book for a light reading. The plot is good and the punctuation and everything too. So it makes it easier to read. Some dialogs were repeating, so that was something I didn't like much. But I like the story overall. It keeps you going, and I like that."

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Awakening of the Alphas Mate

"Don't bother. Utterly repetitive. The same situation and conversation over and over again throughout the book. Then, to add insult, the leading lady has a complete personality change in the middle of the book."

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Boring Book

"Too much drama and wars where enemies are allowed to go so they can come back. There's no substance and too far fetched to like it at all."

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