What is your opinion?
Horrifying christmas trip to cabin
"It's a good story of 4 friends who caught in the curse forest which is chill and dark ,full with large dark shadow,but they fight against the forest dark shadows .ANd keep going ahead to solve the problem. They want to be free from dark curse of the forest. "
Good but confusing
"Lots of potential. Grammar, spelling, punctuation all spot on. Would love to have seen a bit more character development. That would not only make the ending more impactful, but would definitely increase the emotional terror. The biggest problem is the information changes...and gaps. Other than the santa demon and a handful of Noels, I struggle to see the connection to the title. And how did Sarah get the book left at the church; how did Evan suddenly have powers; and how could Elena’s mother be dead yet she had talked to her in the beginning. Finding the heart of the forest was also very confusing at times. There was also a major plot change about halfway through. It felt like 2 different books at that point. And how many were in the group? What ritual was Sarah talking about that they did supposedly in the beginning? I did finish reading it because I felt invested in getting out of the forest with the group. You have a way of invoking great emotions through your writing. And despite the big errors in plot, I plan on reading more of your stories. "
Interesting Story
"I found this book to be interesting so far. The first few chapters definitely set the tone for the rest of the story. I am not much of a horror fan but this book will certainly make it hard to sleep at night. The writer does a great job at leaving clues. I would highly recommend this book to horror fans."
