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This.... simply breathtaking!!

"This book, while it may be ongoing... literally called to me through my dreams. I've been meaning to write a review on this story for so long, and honestly, after a while and I FINALLY had some free time, I thought "Why not?" Rose is a vivacious, stunning, and analytic character. I love how she's completely different from the other characters, how she speaks her mind with confidence. I also love how the asterisks show the differentiation between how the characters are portrayed and how they are truly feeling. Like an unspoken rule.... that is a creative form of writing that I haven't seen most writers be able to pull off. Simply extraordinary. The descriptive imagery shown in this story is something out of the ordinary. In a good way. I love the way you listed all of the sensory details out; my mind instantly comprehended the places and how the characters look like. Not many authors have the ability to do that to me! Now here comes the plot and the overall plot twists. I have never been this shocked before in MY. LIFE. I don't know how these characters can have switch ups that crazy in a matter of seconds... don't get me wrong though, I LOVE IT! I did notice a few capilization mistakes, but it's merely nothing compared to the rest of this story. As mentioned in the title, this story is simple breathtaking. Honestly? This story has its title branded on my skin; my heart belongs to this story fully. I can't wait to read more. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more! I will be jumping off the walls if you do so :) (No rush, as always!) I don't want to give a lot of spoilers in my review for the other readers, but if you read this, you can write a comment on my wall about what you think! Love, Ash"

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