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The Alpha's Substitute Bride

"Loved the story ❤️ "

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perdi

"Such a beautiful story. Author you are a virtuoso at creating powerful and emotional scenes "

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Amazing!!!

"Amazing read!!!! I am hooked!"

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Great job

"I like the sequence of events. Not necessarily drawing out a day to day story but going back and forth enough for the reader to fill in the gaps effectively. "

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Amazing

"That book had surprised me on many levels and I loved it. Keep going"

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Congratulations

"Well done, what a great achievement!! Love the book, couldn’t put it down. "

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Slow Burn Supe Mystery

"Every Chapter is a cliffhanger waiting to hang another. Anyone who likes mysteries and light hearted sci fi should be able to enjoy this novel. It’s not as much romance as relationship driven. The grammar is above average. The story flows from one chapter to the next with a few confusing moments that are resolved quickly. I found myself giggling, sometimes misty eyed, worried, angry and anticipating, always waiting for the click click click of the rollercoaster to stop and the dip into the ride to start. I am about a dozen chapters to the end and I never want the ride to stop. "

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LOVED IT!!

"This was one of my favorite books I have read on Inkitt.. possibly ever. The plot was AMAZING! I was super intrigued the whole time. The characters were written well too. I enjoyed the different POVs and how descriptive the writer is. I could visualize everything that was happening clearly. Definitely recommend this!!"

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Awesome

"thank you, i enjoyed very much!"

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Beautiful writing

"I couldn't put it down , great writing "

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The alpha’s substitute bride the hallorans saga

"Great story really enjoyed it. Hope there will be a sequel for Liam "

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soooo intriguing

"truly fantastic work here! pulled in from start to finish and i don’t think there’s a bad chapter in this book. refreshing story, plot lines, and twists with pretty great pacing. just enough world building to add depth and weight to the conflicts. everyone character got a chance to shine and the progression of maeve and ronan’s relationship was the cherry on top. loved every second of reading this❤️‍🔥"

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The Alphas Substitute bride

"I really liked this book. The plot and story line were both well done and thought out. The writing style is easy to follow but the grammatical errors need some tweaking."

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Nice

"This book was really good. It was funny, suspenseful, serious, and romantic. The characters all blended well together and the story from start to finish flowed beautifully. "

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Great 😃👍

"I loved everything about this book, the characters were all strong in their own ways and the suspense 👏👏👏👌👌"

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Great ending

"Thank you for sharing your creative endeavors with us readers. I love your characters and how you develop them. I love all the emotions you pour out of them. I look forward to reading more of your work."

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One of the best books on the app !

"Perfect balance between plot and romance."

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Good read!

"This was a very intriguing plot concept; I really like it! All of the characters were incredibly well developed, and the world building was well done. It all leaves plenty of openings and desire for new stories without detracting from the story being told here."

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The Alpha’s Substitute Bride

"What a fabulous story! Although it was neatly tied up and no horrid cliffhanger to lead into a book 2, it does leave lots of different threads and characters that will be the gift that keeps on giving. Very well written and edited with a dramatic and unusual storyline, a very VERY readable book that is hard to put down. I almost didn’t read it as the title seemed a bit naff (sorry) but as I once read a story about a moose shifter which was one of the most enjoyable and entertaining books ever, I decided to give it a go; I’m so pleased I gave it a go. Excellent!!!"

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The Alpha's Substitute Bride

"I literally did not want to stop reading once I started. I love the complex simplicity of the storyline. The Author did a great job with each character personality, a balance of humor, stoicism, grief, happiness, anger, etc., all the emotions. Overall, really good story. "

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