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A Fictional Story to Close to Home

"As a woman who's found herself in a somewhat similar situation, I fully appreciate the force of The Pull between Damien & Lila; of the need to keep vows at all costs. I truly enjoy the author's writing style. However, based on the emotional draw created in the early chapters, I would love to see the author create a greater depth in the emotions of the characters in the later ones. The author certainly possesses the the ability!"

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