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Time Maze

"I'm already intrigued from the first chapter. Tyson and Marcus need each other to get out of whatever they've gotten into. I wonder how they got there in the first place and even how they met. I can't wait to read more and find out the answers to my questions (hopefully) in the chapters to come."

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Wow! Very Unique Story : )

""Time Maze" is a unique and humorous story of two long time friends who face unexpected challenges together! The characters are very well thought out. The story is suspenseful with plot twists that come to light as the characters are learning about their situation. Very well written and engaging! Great Job! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story and I can't wait to read your other stories too! "

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Time Maze

"I am enjoying the story so far! The characters are very engaging, especially Marcus. I wonder how the story proceeds! Keep up the great work. Your work has loads of potential. One thing I can suggest is that there is too much use of the word, said. You can use some other synonyms so that readers don’t get bored. Overall, it’s amazing. ❤️✨"

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Great story with a good plot and believable characters.

"I like the story, plot, characters, and struggles of Tyson and Marcus. I don't want to say too much to avoid spoiling it for future readers, no pun intended. But it is great."

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A Great Adventure Story!

"Marcus and Tyson, the two inimitable MCs of this story, are so cool that you'll fall in love with them in the first few chapters and never forget them. They'll make you laugh and cry, and maybe make you want to kick them sometimes... they are the younger brother you never had :) Follow them into this unusual, unexpected, unpredictable journey through a Time Maze into the past; you won't regret it!"

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