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A shocked novel

"Excellence in story telling with enough plot twist to hook you throughout. Q10/10"

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Loved it

"Great second story"

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Well written

"It’s a very well written story with multiple plot twists I didn’t expect the ending in a sense I guess it made sense . Loved the story very little grammar (I didn’t notice any) errors. "

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Suspenseful

"I normally do not like the Luna stories but the 2 books were interesting from the beginning to the end. So glad I didn't have to wait for the last book."

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Fragmented Fate book 2

"Beautiful story. All range of emotions. Thoughtfully constructed. 😃"

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Fragmented Fate book 2

"I love this story nothing to dislike. Would have loved the FL to be less predictable and have a very strong character than portrayed but hey still love her the way she is I would recommend it to all my friends and family even those who don't like reading I feel it would capture their interest. It's that good😌☺️😉💯❤️ Despite my disappointment in the FL's predictability, I don't find any fault in this book so far. I just love, love every bit of it❤️. The story line is on point, the characters are strong and my favourite part of all is that it's got some humorous parts. An all round book if I may say so. It's a 10 for me"

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Loved It.

"I really enjoyed the story. All story lines were tied up...thanks for giving poor Alan a fated mate. Perfect amount of details. Looking forward to Ivan and Aurora that should be a fun couple. Loved how truly guilty she felt and the way those around her chose to show up for her in those moments. Felt surprised through the books how the plot was developed."

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Fragmented Fate: Book 2

"Even though written quickly, it has been one of the best stories I have read this year (I read A LOT)! Part 1 and 2 flow together seamlessly, and both books had me a bit emotional. Part two started a teeny bit slow, but once I finished about 3-4 chapters in, I was right back where we left off in book 1. I wish the story wouldn't have ended. Thankfully, the author will give us another book about Aurora and Ivan! I can't wait!!!!"

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Simply Superb!

"Dear Moon, please never, ever stop sharing your gift with us! Great characters, twisty plots, written so realistically, I fell in love, cried tears of joy, tears of heart break, and shouted your praises until the neighbors asked me, not so politely, "Knock it off!" Your ability to take us away from the everyday mundane lives, to follow breathlessly, on a journey. Thank you from my heart and soul!"

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A captive story

"A great werewolf story with very strong characters. An unexpected plot twist I couldn’t stop reading but please, read the story in order. Very good writing. I hope the story of Ivan and Aurora is coming soon. "

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Fragmented Fate 1and 2

"Beautiful story compeling plot。 i loved it so much"

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Fragmented Fate book 2

"Thank you author for sharing this book with us I highly recommend this book very well written good plot and even a bonus chapter "

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Great book

"Really enjoyed the book, loved the characters. Great plot. "

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I’m in love 🥰

"Wow! This was a rollercoaster of emotions. Each one more intense than the other. Would definitely recommend this series. Thank you Moon for the lovely story and what a story it was! Can’t wait to read more from you. ❤️❤️❤️"

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fragmented fate book 2

"wow am just short of words but am happy i stumble upon ur book. this is by far one of the best since have started reading from inkitt "

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Love it💕

"I love this book‼💯🙏🏾🥰🥰🥰"

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Fragmented Fate 2

"Even better!"

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You rock girl!

"I’ll stay posted for the other stories. Whoo! Loved the ups and sharp corners. Keep going 👏🏽"

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Poor Delilah

"I think Delilah is going to figure this out very soon. I'm sitting on the edge waiting for the next update. 🍿🍺"

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Fragmented Fate 2

"❤️❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😍😍"

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