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Interesting twists

"I love how this story twisted into something I didn’t expect "

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Amazing

"So far so good can’t wait to read more "

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The Church Girl and Ruthless Don

"Loved the story hope there's more to come great job author 👏👏🙏😀🙏😀"

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Lana

"Enjoyed the book. Can't wait for part 2"

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Book 2 is a must please

"I read in one good 👍 😌 🙂 ☺️ hope book 2 comes out. Really good read Good job!!!"

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The church girl and the ruthless don

"I loved this book. It was exciting an excellent read, but way to short. But l may get some sleep now. Till your next book l cannot wait to read more. "

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The Church Girl and the Ruthless Mafia Don

"Great story, lots of action and drama"

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His weakness

"So captivating"

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The Church Girl And The Rutless Mafia Don

"This story has great potential. I absolutely love the plot. Your writing style needs a bit of work. The story lacks that smooth flow, especially in the beginning, I did howevr notice an improvement towards the end, though. Overall, it's an interesting story so far."

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Church Girl

"I like the fact that the male lead is very dominant and strong. The plot is really good. The female lead is first rightfully opposed to their union and then eventually comes around. The story is gripping and I can hardly put the book down. Not done yet, but it's riveting 👍"

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The Chirch Girl and the Ruthless Mafia Don

"I’m dissatisfied with this story. I thought that eventually the storyline would get better as it went along, but it didn’t."

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Good

"What a brutal story 🙈 how will it end for A and C?"

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Claudia

"Look like a good story well writing im waiting to see the final"

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Giving this book a five star

"From the beginning of this book, I knew that this story is the big deal. The main character is crazy, making him interesting. The few chapters I have read doesn't lack in action. Everything is on point. I just like the book. Well done Author. Fore, this book is a must to read. I will like to recommend it to everyone that loves Mafia romance book. They should check it out."

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