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Wayward

"Wayward has so much going for it. An interesting location, intriguing characters that show depth and the potential for growth, and brewing conflict that could lead to some cool action scenes. Vanta has a way with words, using great similes and descriptions to paint a picture in your mind of the scenery, as well as the tone of the people the main character interacts with. Outside of some very, very minor grammatical and punctuation errors and some overly lingering descriptions, Vanta has a very promising story cooking and I can't wait to read more!"

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Wayward

"I am absolutely hooked up. I love the dialogue between the characters. I can see that you have put so much effort into your work as I can see your grammar is perfect. Keep up the great work and keep coming with intriguing plots. "

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