Inkitt
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Love it!

"Can't wait to read what else happens..."

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Good

"Yes the story has many loopholes, which caused problems few times. I was so confused cause I couldn't understand whom you are talking about. The main thing I would like to mention is the emotions, there were times were the emotions didn't match but overtime it got better. Hopefully the second book will be better. Keep working hard, best of luck."

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It was amazing

"Manddie turning into a vampire My sister Becouse I love horrors"

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Mysterious

"Very interesting😍😍😍"

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