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"the Unfortunate Tale of Talid Farrowheart"

"Justice finally catching up with Talid, for the crime of rape of the princess, his arm is cut off, his penis cut off, and he awaits, in a jail cell , for the Justice's to come and take him to the gallows. Talid memories of loosing his wife and daughter, killing them both, was misguided payment for his future actions. Story well written, characters positions in the story excellent. The justices never gave up searching and then finding Talid, and then, the end, his final punishment. Excellent imagination, story telling and final plot realized."

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