This story contains themes of: assault, cheating, depression, domestic violence, torture, violent death, explicit imagery
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A union which was meant to bring peace. ~~ An encounter in the woods which might destroy it all. ~~ A scorned mate hell-bent on destruction. ~~ And two star-crossed lovers whose choices could make or break the balance of nature. ~~ In an unforgiving world where teeth and claws rule and life is measured by the survival of the fittest, Raelyn is forced into an arranged union to save her native werewolf pack from war. Struggling to adjust to the life of a submissive she-wolf, she rebels against her abusive mate and his dominant Alpha family, only to be coerced into an inferior role until she finds powers buried deep within her.
All Chapters in Part I are told from Raelyn's POV.
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T.M: Ich kann es gar nicht anders sagen also ich liebe diese Geschichte einfach. Sie hat für mich einfach alles was es braucht. Sie hat mich einfach mitgenommen auf eine echt schöne Reise. Danke❤️
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maryketteler: Ich bin von diesem Roman sehr angetan. Es handelt sich um eine wunderschöne Geschichte, die durch ein tolles Happy End abgeschlossen wird.
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Kota2015: A really good read. This is my first time on this web site. Glad I found it!
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Xonereth: I really enjoyed this story. It was pretty straightforward plot wise, uncomplicated. Loved the characters and the world. It unfolded at a good pace. Keep writing and I will definitely check out your other works!
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phelix21: Gesucht, leichte Kost für zwischendurchGefunden, viel Wahrheit in jedem Kapitel!Jedes Kapitel mit einem Tagebucheintrag zu beenden ist ein schöner schreibtechnischer Kniff.
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natstarr: Druid? That’s so interesting. Love these little surprises you give
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Obsidian: He's hilarious. Like, actually. I loved it. You're writing style is great, although you could do with a few less murmurs and mutters. I know it sounds critical, but I have the same problem and I hate it. Overall, it was one of the best stories I've read on here so far. I liked it better than those M...
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Doridoo: I really enjoyed this story and had trouble putting it down at 2:00 in the morning but couldn’t read more due to blurry eyes! I even reread the chapter I left on so I could relive it again. The story had me tear up and gasp in parts. I Look forward to more stories from this author. Now I need to ca...
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Summary
Your summary reads really well, it is smooth and really informative without giving too much detail of what will happen! I can imagine reading it on the back of a printed novel in a shop. Really nice work so far.
I only have a couple of notable things to mention, one of which being the ~ throughout your summary. Is there a particular reason for them? And the other thing is that I hope you avoid overdone tropes that a lot of authors use in these types of books. I really want to see originality to set your work apart because your writing, from this small section, already puts you at a high mark!
Okay, your summary doesn't give away too much, but still makes the reader want to continue! Let's how this will be. I am actually excited... xD I have never read a wolf story... I just watched Teen Wolf as a teen (like when the episodes first came out... xD)