This story contains themes of: assault, cheating, depression, domestic violence, torture, violent death, explicit imagery
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A union which was meant to bring peace. ~~ An encounter in the woods which might destroy it all. ~~ A scorned mate hell-bent on destruction. ~~ And two star-crossed lovers whose choices could make or break the balance of nature. ~~ In an unforgiving world where teeth and claws rule and life is measured by the survival of the fittest, Raelyn is forced into an arranged union to save her native werewolf pack from war. Struggling to adjust to the life of a submissive she-wolf, she rebels against her abusive mate and his dominant Alpha family, only to be coerced into an inferior role until she finds powers buried deep within her.
All Chapters in Part I are told from Raelyn's POV.
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Aelyn Raven: Wieder eine tolle Geschichte. Leider bin ich erst jetzt dazu gekommen sie zu lesen, aber das tut der Geschichte keinen Abbruch *g* ich freue mich schon auf den nächsten Adventskalender
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bm: Sehr gutes Schreiben. War total in der Geschichte und habe mitgefiebert, wie es weiter geht. Konnte das Buch kaum zur Seite legen Sehr spannend geschrieben. Freue mich auf Band 2 Hätte gern das Ruby mit Beiden lebt.Und es fehlen noch sehr viel Antworten
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Fiona Walker: A thoroughly enjoyable story with a slightly different take on werewolves. I loved his commitment to his mate and her open mindedness.
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Ari_Cl: Again a wonderful book. Continue this way, love how splendid it is
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Michaela: Super geschrieben, tolle Geschichte.Vielen lieben Dank dafür ❤️
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Victoria: Hi,I analyzed your work, and I think it has a very unique and engaging storytelling style. The way you present your ideas and emotions really stands out. By the way are you currently working on any other stories or writing projects?
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Victoria: Hi,I analyzed your work, and I think it has a very unique and engaging storytelling style. The way you present your ideas and emotions really stands out. By the way are you currently working on any other stories or writing projects?
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Summary
Your summary reads really well, it is smooth and really informative without giving too much detail of what will happen! I can imagine reading it on the back of a printed novel in a shop. Really nice work so far.
I only have a couple of notable things to mention, one of which being the ~ throughout your summary. Is there a particular reason for them? And the other thing is that I hope you avoid overdone tropes that a lot of authors use in these types of books. I really want to see originality to set your work apart because your writing, from this small section, already puts you at a high mark!
Okay, your summary doesn't give away too much, but still makes the reader want to continue! Let's how this will be. I am actually excited... xD I have never read a wolf story... I just watched Teen Wolf as a teen (like when the episodes first came out... xD)