Part I -- The Sacrifice
All Chapters in Part I are told from Raelyn's POV.
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Lunar Eclipse
This story contains themes of: assault, cheating, depression, domestic violence, torture, violent death, explicit imagery
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Summary
A union which was meant to bring peace. ~~ An encounter in the woods which might destroy it all. ~~ A scorned mate hell-bent on destruction. ~~ And two star-crossed lovers whose choices could make or break the balance of nature. ~~ In an unforgiving world where teeth and claws rule and life is measured by the survival of the fittest, Raelyn is forced into an arranged union to save her native werewolf pack from war. Struggling to adjust to the life of a submissive she-wolf, she rebels against her abusive mate and his dominant Alpha family, only to be coerced into an inferior role until she finds powers buried deep within her.
- 1Part I -- The Sacrifice
- 21 -- Encounter in the Woods
- 32 -- Meeting My Mate
- 43 -- Claiming
- 54 -- My New Home
- 65 -- Mixed Feelings
- 76 -- Future Mates
- 87 -- Joining the Pack
- 98 -- A Fateful Night
- 109 -- Silent Cries
- 1110 -- Sacrifices to the Moon
- 1211 -- Spring Fair
- 1312 -- Night of the Equinox
- 1413 -- Red
- 1514 -- Run-Ins
- 1615 -- Bitter Truths
- 1716 -- Trouble
- 1817 -- Heavy Hearts
- 1918 -- Spirit World
- 2019 -- Culprits
- 2120 -- Strengthening Heart
- 2221 -- Summer
- 2322 -- Pups
- 2423 -- Rivalry
- 2524 -- Captured
- 2625 -- Night of the Lunar Eclipse (Part I)
- 27Part II -- The Reckoning
- 2826 -- Night of the Lunar Eclipse (Part II)
- 2927 -- Alpha Born
- 3028 -- Sparks
- 3129 -- Bear Hunt
- 3230 -- Power Play
- 3331 -- Blindsided
- 3432 -- Crushed
- 3533 -- True Mates
- 3634 -- Northern Lights
- 3735 -- Playing With Fire
- 3836 -- Bumpy Mission
- 3937 -- In a Bind
- 4038 -- The Power of Magic
- 4139 -- Temptations
- 4240 -- Fire Spears
- 4341 -- Heat
- 4442 -- Secrets Revealed
- 4543 -- Howl of an Alpha
- 4644 -- Promises
- 4745 -- Baggage
- 4846 -- Rage
- 4947 -- Lost
- 5048 -- Wolf Army
- 5149 -- Burning
- 5250 -- Taste of Death
- 5351 -- Spiteful
- 5452 -- Coldness
- 55Part III -- The Malediction
- 5653 -- Iomaire Draíochta
- 5754 -- Inquisitions
- 5855 -- The Powers Within
- 5956 --- Defiance
- 6057 -- Glencoe (Raelyn)
- 6158 -- Trust Me
- 6259 -- By Vote of the Council
- 6360 -- Fear Under Your Skin
- 6461 -- A Trip Down Memory Lane
- 6562 -- Closing In
- 6663 -- On Enemy Turf
- 6764 -- Beautiful Force of Nature
- 6865 -- Strongbox
- 6966 -- Trials of Strength
- 7067 -- Hidden Truths
- 7168 -- Betrayal
- 72Intermittence -- The Woods
- 73Part IV -- The Choice
- 7469 -- Reconnecting With the Past
- 7570 -- Cassum's Secret
- 7671 -- Trouble on the Horizon
- 7772 -- Achilles Heel
- 7873 -- Resistance
- 7974 -- Taking Sides
- 8075 -- Simmering Anger
- 8176 -- Parenting Advice
- 8277 -- Respite
- 8378 -- Grasping at Straws
- 8479 -- Heart to Heart
- 8580 -- Choices
- 8681 -- Drifting
- 8782 -- Battle Under the Lunar Eclipse I (Kendrick)
- 8883 -- Battle Under the Lunar Eclipse II (Marush)
- 8984 -- Breath of Death
- 9085 -- Battle Under the Lunar Eclipse III
- 9186 -- A Proposal
- 9287 -- A World in Disarray
- 9388 -- Confessions
- 9489 -- Two Souls Fused as One
- 9590 -- A New Beginning
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Maiden of the forest
Summary
Your summary reads really well, it is smooth and really informative without giving too much detail of what will happen! I can imagine reading it on the back of a printed novel in a shop. Really nice work so far.
I only have a couple of notable things to mention, one of which being the ~ throughout your summary. Is there a particular reason for them? And the other thing is that I hope you avoid overdone tropes that a lot of authors use in these types of books. I really want to see originality to set your work apart because your writing, from this small section, already puts you at a high mark!
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Okay, your summary doesn't give away too much, but still makes the reader want to continue! Let's how this will be. I am actually excited... xD I have never read a wolf story... I just watched Teen Wolf as a teen (like when the episodes first came out... xD)
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