wings of christmas

"Truly lovely story. The pain of loss on multiple levels and the glory of love and happiness in the end. I felt the love from all involved. There were a few typo's, spacing issues, but my main problem was the change of POV throughout the story. I had to stop and think about how the story was being told, as a narrative or first person, somewhat disturbing in the telling, but not from the story itself. I was actually looking into your horror story when I found this piece and I am very pleased I did. Thank you for sharing."