What is your opinion?
My honest review
"First I would like to point out your gorgeous writing style! It is so fluid and smooth, so poetic in the way you describe everything that I feel like I’m almost holding it in hardback in my hands. I can’t fault you in much at all in these two chapter nor your prologue. I’m no expert but I spotted no punctuation, grammatical or spelling errors and your dialogue is strong and compelling, as is your plot. You have added mystery, backstory and an end goal for the protagonist, as well as relationships between characters and that’s in just two chapters! All I would say to you, is watch for information dumping. Spread it out to make things more memorable and more digestible for the readers, let them discover it as they go along, diving into this new world that is so different from our own. But other than that I would say keep following the path you’re on, I can see you drawing in a lot of readers!"
Amazing. Definitely recommend.
"The prologue was so intriguing that it made me curious to find out how the story will progress. It is such an amazing opening with a very good writing style. The plot so far is amazing, and it makes me want to read more. The characterization of the main character, though we don't know much about her yet, is interesting. The mystery also seems very promising. Overall, this is an amazing story so far, and it breaks my heart to know it isn't finished yet, but that's no issue to me. I'm going to be anticipating the updates. "
Just… perfect!
"This book is just the one I’ve been looking for. Something that instantly sparked my interest. I’m the sort of person who usually reads classics, I’m used to a specific writing style so it’s harder for me to write to attract readers but this? It got me at first but I’ve adapted to it. I love the plot, it’s amazing. Caught my attention very quickly. Grammar is spectacular, typing on a phone is hard and this is impressive. It’s a lovely book, filling the void that stopped me from committing to my hobbies and I can’t wait to read the rest of this book. Love this 🥰 "
Review
"You have done an amazing work so far. Keep up the great work. Your work has loads of potential. The story is very captivating. Keep up the good work.❤️🌸"
