Inkitt
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Good story

"I liked this story so far. It was different with a woman who had been a ghost for 20 years meeting Anubis the Egyptian God of the Dead and eventually being given a body back by him and them falling in love The writing is good and I have not noticed any misspelling or punctuation mistakes."

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Approvato

"I really like the dynamic between the protagonist and Bis, they are really cute, and I also like the idea itself and the protagonist's backstory, which is very well done 👍"

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Pact

"This is a cute short story. Lila’s story is sad but not after she finds Anubis. I love their story. Fantastic job author. 💞🩷💞"

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Cozy, Funny, Emotional

"So… it took me a little longer to finish this one, but I’m so glad I did! Nika’s writing style might feel a bit different at first, but trust me—it grows on you. While many authors lean heavily on dialogue, Nika opts for more introspective monologues, which gives the impression that Lily (yes, I’m calling her that too) is speaking directly to you. The story itself is a fascinating dive into Egyptian lore, and the way it’s woven into the narrative is just plain cool. I found myself enjoying it whenever I had a moment of free time—and believe me, free time is a luxury for me. So if I’m using it to read this story, you know it’s worth it! That said, this book doesn’t wrap everything up—it’s part of a larger story, as explained in the final chapter. But overall, I really enjoyed it! There were moments when I had to re-read certain paragraphs, especially when my mind wandered while visualizing what was happening. Still, the effort was worth it. Bottom line: Give it a shot! It’s unique, engaging, and worth your time."

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The pact

"Have enjoyed this story, is there more?"

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The call of a Dream

"I like how the story started and how it is going I will recommend it to my friend It is an interesting story"

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