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Good

"The book is good, but I wish that Maribel would stand up for herself"

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Enjoyed

"Reading your story "

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The alpha and the Omega

"If you want an awesome read pick it up. You won't be sorry. It has action an adventure and a little spice"

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The alpha and the omega

"I wish her mom could have just left her something to make her have closure of why they were rogues and why things were the way that they ended up being maybe she wouldn't have to deal with this way of living"

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Interesting

"The storyline is rather unusual so I’ve kept reading wondering if this alpha will redeem himself or if there’s a reason for his cruelty😒"

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Why is it that the woman always has to suffer?

"This story is somewhat confusing. The woman seems to bear all the pain. In a fated mates scenario, both individuals should feel the pain, and resisting the attraction should be incredibly difficult. Their first instinct should be to protect their mate, not to punish them. Yet, once again, it’s the girl who suffers. How is it that Carter knows about her past and her father, but Travis remains unaware?What happened to Travis chosen mate?"

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