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veil of atlantis
"beautiful beginning to a magical journey for the characters and readers alike. the bound between the boys pulls on the heartstrings. Elias' protectiveness of Ralphi, and his need to free his friend makes want to reach out and embrace them both. I hope the magi is true to his honor as he leads the boys on this journey. Amazing descriptive skills place you right into the story. I can't wait to follow these boys on their adventure. thank you for sharing."
The Veil of Atlantis
"I appreciated how the introduction to this world seamlessly intertwined with the main character’s backstory. It encourages reflection on how such a childhood might influence future decisions and emotions, emphasizing its potential long-term impact on their journey. I noticed a few grammatical errors; however, they are minor, easily corrected, and don’t disrupt the overall flow or enjoyment of the story. Keep up the great work, and be sure to utilize all available tools to promote the book."
