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Good

"This book grips you from beginning to ending. I was ready to throw tablet. You know a book is good when you're talking to the characters as if they can hear you. I loved it, can't wait for the next book. Moon, you did your thing!"

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Fragmented fate book one

"Really great work. Please tell me that the next one is ready to read . And what the title is "

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So intriguing!

"Can’t wait to read the next book"

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PLOT TWIST

"I was skeptical at first about the book I was like “ain’t no way all these people liked the book” I’m not shocked at all woo wow wow. The story is very well written it kept the suspense going and I’m not very patient so many times after connecting the dots that so many characters are finding hard to connect I was like “what if I… just skipped a chapter or 2” definitely don’t regret reading all the way through. Great plot the author is really good at keeping the suspense, but the only thing is the smut for me it’s a little long which I get some people read through it but that was a bit awkward for me (personally). But overall see y’all in book 2 "

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Captivating

"I just couldn't stop reading. The cliffhanger ending was very good. Hope the next book is available soon. If you like a good plot this is the book to read."

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Fragmented Fate

"Beyond excited to start the second book. Lovely work."

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Great book

"I’m loving the story plot so far. It’s very interesting and attention grabbing ."

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Fragmented Fate

"Loved the story very much"

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Fragmented fate book 1

"This book totally blew my mind! The suspense is everything. Moon is definitely an exceptional writer"

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Awesome

"Everything, I liked EVERYTHING!!! "

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Fragmated fate

"There's nothing I don't like about this book 📚.. you left me hanging how long do we have to wait?? I only commented one because I was so engrossed in the book...I hope we don't have to wait long please "

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Phyllis

"I am really enjoying the story so far. The characters have a realness and really ring true. I like that humor is included but don't take over the story line. Can't wait to see what happens to Del and Hugo."

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Fragmented Fate book 1

"Oh my goodness can't wait for book 2 this book is brilliant and the plot fab very well written good flow "

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Barbara Levins

"I loved the book but I wanted her to get back with Hugo. If she doesn't I won't be reading these books anymore. I like them together. "

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Love it

"Ohhhhhhhh this book was so good!!!! And the cliffhanger woah chefs kiss 💋 . I ship them so hard y’all need more of them. Thank god book2 is out. See u guys in the comments there. "

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❤️❤️💯💯

"I can't wait to read book 2. I highly recommend 👌 "

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What a great read!

"Wow! What a wonderful book. Love the storyline and characters. Author has a wonderful imagination and the book has been written extremely well. Can’t wait to read the rest. "

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Enjoyed it

"Wasn’t sure at the beginning but it turned out to be a good read. Hopefully book 2 will be available to read. So many writers leave you hanging which is infuriating."

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Love! Love!

"Funny dialogue with all the juicy details you want! "

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Omg

"I didn't think I would love this book this much but Da** I'm hooked. "

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