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I want more, please sir

"I have enjoyed this story, the drama, the intrigue, the deception, the resolve, the sacrifice, the jealousy, the cost of love... and everything in between. Each chapter filled with so much, making the reader crave for the next. The current ending leaves the reader make its own ending, but longing for more. "

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The Alpha's Bride

"Book is a beautiful read, loved it, and also tapped into my emotions. Would read again and I was hooked. It got confusing with the spelling errors and he being she and vice versa, one would get confused and not know who is being referred to. Spelling mistakes are forgiven and not at all a bad thing. The ending amazed me, cant wait for book 2. Loved loved loved the book"

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Excellent work

"This is one beautifully written piece. Loved it"

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The alpha bride

"Like it very good written "

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Recommended for other readers

"Really great job!! The author created a really good story and character, a big world where we learn with the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that you're able to avoid every cliché without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. Still early but I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves. "

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Awesome

"This novel is awesome. I love the story telling and the plot. The MC is so likeable. More chapters author. "

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Compelling

"The story is compelling. The MC is good. I will like to see more of her. I can't wait to see the male MC too."

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Just read it

"Just Read this novel no need to have second thoughts about it. Hur hur one of the romance novels I like and by the way what's with the cover it looks weddingly to me and I keep thinking that the people in the cover are Ava and Leo"

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I love it

"I love the plot, the characters, the writing, I love everything about it. Excellent writing."

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Review

"You have done an amazing job in writing this novel. The plot is very engaging. Keep up the good work. 🤩"

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Intriguing

"The beginning really captivated my attention. I love the wolf-blood thing. Time will tell if he stays that way. The grammar is good too. Maybe too early for the characters but they are well weitten."

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Welcome to my work

"The author here. Please support my work with your reviews and donations. God bless."

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Great Plot

"Interesting plot."

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Good storyline, juvenile writing skills.

"The writing doesn’t flow well in my opinion. It feels choppy at times and word choices are strange. I’m wondering if English isn’t the authors first language. If so that would explain why the translation was poor. The story line is good, but I find myself inserting words and reading it differently in my head to make it flow more smoothly, and for that reason I had to abandon the story. If this goes through a professional edit, and gets cleaned up a little, I’d love to come back to this story. "

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