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"I enjoyed the story the characters were so much more than the first few chapters led us to believe. It kept me interested because you really didn’t know what was gonna happen next "

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Beautiful

"Love it The characters were believable The story had such emotion and you could feel with the characters"

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Very sweet

"It's heart worming. So romantic 😍 "

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"Wow... I absolutely loved Xavier and Susie's story! It perfectly captures the meet-cute theme. I’ll admit, I’m usually not a fan of short stories because they often lack the depth needed to truly connect with the characters, but this one was an exception—I have no regrets reading it! You provided just enough insight into their personalities and backstories to make them feel real. And that spicy scene in the last chapter? Loved it! As someone who enjoys and writes erotica, it was definitely a highlight for me. 😉 Tip: I would have given a full 5 stars for grammar and punctuation, but there are a few minor errors that need attention. They don’t affect the flow or comprehension of the story, but with some editing, your book will be absolutely perfect! Well done, Autumn, and best of luck with the contest! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼"

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Nice read. Almost like a Christmas movie except it's not

"Nice a free flowing book. But I can not deny that it is like a movie I must have watched "

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Good Fast Read

"I enjoyed the story, easy to read and get captured into the characters. Lovely short romance story "

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Good and short …

"Ok, now I get to change my review! When they were in Alaska, they were two completely different people. Once we get to know them back at home, oh man, their individual lives completely change the dynamic of the story. This has been a fun book to read! It was a simple story really, but every issue or conflict was resolved, leaving no stone unturned. If I really wanted to pick at it though, the only things I would have wanted to read more about is (1) their move to Hawaii with their new jobs, (2) their new home and maybe even marriage and/or children, (3) and an actual reconciliation between Xavier and Ino. All in all, this was a great, feel good book to read, even without those suggestions! "

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