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El último día

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Summary

Jon y Matt, amigos de toda la vida, se enfrentan a un evento que cambiará su amistad para siempre.

Genre
Horror/Children
Author
Luis
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Era el último día de clases, en el condado de Orange. Jon y Matt habían sido amigos desde siempre. Eran de esos chicos que compartían todo: risas, secretos... hasta el agua de una misma botella.




Sus padres también eran amigos. Por eso, la distancia entre ellos nunca fue un problema.



Sin embargo, una tarde, Matt vio algo que no podía comprender. En el patio trasero, cerca de la casa de la señora Inés, encontró a Jon inclinado sobre un gato muerto. El animal estaba en estado de putrefacción, y Jon... Jon le arrancaba el corazón con las manos. Luego, lo mordía, como si fuera lo más natural del mundo.



Matt no podía creer lo que veían sus ojos. Ya no eran inocentes. Su respiración se entrecortó. Una lágrima, lenta y silenciosa, rodó por su mejilla.



Horas más tarde, en un granero cercano, Matt finalmente habló:

—Eso de chupar sangre... como vampiro... es algo muy malo.



Jon lo miró, con una sonrisa fría y los ojos oscuros, como su alma.




—¿Y comer carne? —respondió, con una calma aterradora.



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